Do you like this song???????

I like it a lot. The only constructive criticism i could give you would be that some of it doesn't make much sense. Like the rainbow fish part. I like the second choice better. The one with bliss in it. But I love how you added bits about the song she wrote you in it multiple times. :D keep it up, it would make a really good piano piece, with an intro similar to "Can't Find the Words" by Karina.